Cartooning - Not a Bad Effort

We were at the hospital this afternoon - waiting, waiting, waiting.
We looked in the newspaper and had a look at the cartoons with the kids.
Some of them were very funny.... it is amazing how 3 or 4 carefully drafted frames can make you laugh. So as a family we tried our hand at drawing a funny cartoon.

Here is my first effort - I was pretty happy with myself - and I even got a good laugh from "some" of my family. That was nice. But Mum just told me that I "better not give up my day job!"

What do you think? (you need to double-click the image to get a better look)